Cell Shading Attempt 2

This one is the remake of this old work https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/87323720 So, do you guys like it and should I continue to remake old works? and which ones of those do you guys prefer to be remade? https://www.mediafire.com/file/jdkbk4jjw6sjh9s/Cell2.rar/file