Ok now it’s cooking with story. Nude beaches are always remote/secluded/hidden. What is they’re just in the center of town? I also am playing with the idea of a “marina” overhead, as though they are underwater. Boats floating overhead are just a normal aspect of the urban waterfront.
It’s a bit of a mess after working it over so much.. so now it’s at the stage of needing a full redraw. It will be interesting to see what negative space u can get back by cleaning up the characters. Those gaps can be filled with fun scene details.
I also like the possibility that they are so unplugged in every sense, yet surrounded by more technology than we can fathom today - a healthier relationship to tech?
Still.. a HUD weather report would be fun. Or maybe WFB? One of them could be saying they’re about to join a meeting, but, camera on?