Sorry for taking this long to post. I had to redo these pages a lot, I wanted to give some tension and deliver the action with a bit of impact. For that I chose the slow and cinematic(detailed) route. As I told you all early, my idea is to make a horror story with muscle girls and some sexy elements here and there, but in the end, it must be a horror story. Something like Hellraiser. The original one. Yep that one.
BUT thanks to the tension and dramatic elements, ii might be distressing for some viewers. I myself got worked a bit sketching some scenes. Maybe I should lower the dial a bit, make it less serious and more campy. Like a friday 13th movie.
Anyway, let me hear your thoughts. After you, it's you who are reading the story.
PS- I did the make fonts bigger! What do you think? I could make it larger BUT i didn't like the aspect of it all. Maybe making bigger bubbles?