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Chapter 7:Sleeping Armies

The gates of the subterranean prison groaned open.Guren snapped to attention at the first scent of perfume and rot. That unsettling chakra, like oil in water, oozed into the chamber before he even arrived. The guards stiffened. The mutated prisoners lurking in their cells hissed and retreated from the bars.Orochimaru had come in person.She bowed low, hair brushing the stone."Lord Orochimaru. You didn't announce your arrival." greeted Guren."No," he said, voice velvet and venom. "I don't need to."He glided past her, pale fingers trailing across the cold stone of the wall. His golden eyes swept the cells with casual interest, as though inspecting tools rather than men."You're to gather them all," he said. "Every prisoner. Every experiment. All of them."Guren looked up, startled."You… wish to transfer them?""I wish to release them," Orochimaru said, smiling faintly. "The world is at war, Guren. And we have an army locked in cages."She straightened, unsure."They won't obey me. Not all of them."He turned, amused."Of course not. But they'll obey me."She hesitated a moment longer. Then gave the order.Cells hissed open with bursts of chakra. The prisoners stumbled into the dim prison yard, blinking through the pain of cursed seal suppression. Dozens of them — some hulking, others spindly, many bearing grotesque remnants of failed transformations. Slitted eyes, blackened veins, partial wings or talons that never quite receded.They stared at Orochimaru with the unease of dogs remembering the lash."You're free," Orochimaru said, spreading his arms. "Free to fight."There was a pause. A twitch of movement among the prisoners.Then one spoke — a broad-shouldered man with teeth filed to points."We ain't your pawns anymore, Snake. You made us monsters. Now you want us to die for you?"The others grumbled in agreement. Some cracked their necks. Others let their cursed seals flare.Orochimaru didn't blink."I see," he said. "Still clinging to the illusion of choice."He raised a single hand and rubbed his face, before bringing it down and pulling his eyelids down with them. The genjutsu came without fanfare — a wave of pressure that passed over the room like a shadow through bone. Suddenly, the prisoners fell silent.Each of them saw it: their own deaths.Skulls crushed. Flesh rotting. Limbs removed with surgical precision. Their screams echoed in a world only they could see — screams even they couldn't hear aloud.They dropped to their knees, one by one. Some whimpered. Some just wept. All obeyed.The illusion passed. Orochimaru exhaled softly."Now," he said, voice light. "Stand up."They did."You'll march east, through the deadlands. You'll rendezvous with Kabuto's column before sunset. From there, the desert. And glory."Guren glanced at him."Kabuto and Sasuke?""They're freeing the other two facilities," Orochimaru said. "The prisoners there will listen. Kabuto has… cultivated loyalty. And Sasuke inspires awe."Guren said nothing. She turned to her men and gave the order to equip the prisoners.And Orochimaru?He began to walk. No longer toward the exit, but to the front of the line. To lead.The prisoners followed. Hesitant at first. Then in step.He didn't have to teach them how to march. They simply did.Snow crunched underfoot as Naruto and Madara emerged from the spiral of space-time, the last teleport of a long and exhausting day.The frozen landscape stretched before them, gleaming like polished crystal in the midday sun. Wind tugged at Naruto's cloak as he turned to survey the area. On the distant hills stood five-pronged monuments — towering arrays of mirror-like panels that caught the light and refracted it downward. These were the Spring Makers, terraforming engines powered by energy within the earth and focused sunlight. Around each one, the land bloomed green with warmth, forming radiant oases of trees and grasslands that stretched for kilometers.Here, though, at the edge of their reach, winter still ruled.Snow Shinobi bustled about, erecting clusters of heat-insulated domes. They resembled igloos in theory, but in practice were elegant structures of reinforced chakra-laced ice and mirrored tiles, glittering like jewels against the barren ice fields.At the center of it all stood Princess Koyuki Kazahana.She turned as they arrived, wrapped in a silken white cloak lined with fur, her royal crest woven into the front. The years had aged her into her role — no longer just an actress or a reluctant heir, but a monarch in truth. And still an actress."Naruto!" she called, beaming.Her guards parted like a curtain as she swept forward.Naruto grinned and stepped up to meet her halfway."Princess Koyuki! It's been a while!"The two embraced briefly, warm breath fogging in the cold air. A camera crew stood at a polite distance, lenses pointed but quiet — this moment, they knew, would be on every newsreel across the continent by morning.Koyuki pulled back and gave him a long look, frowning."Your beautiful hair…"Naruto scratched his nearly bare scalp, a sheepish grin on his face."It'll grow back. Give it a week.""You had the best hair of all the Five Nations, you know," she said, mock mournful. "I had hoped you would grow it long like your master, but now you look like a monk.""I've been fighting like one," Naruto said with a shrug, then turned to the task at hand.He slapped his hands together and summoned the massive storage toad in a puff of steam. The toad opened its mouth and hundreds of Suna refugees poured forth: tired, cold, hungry — but safe. Snow Shinobi immediately moved to guide them into the prepared shelters. Blankets and warm soup were already waiting.Princess Koyuki watched them go, her eyes soft."You came through," she said quietly. "Like always.""We all did," Naruto replied.There was a long pause. She glanced up toward the sky, which had finally cleared of stormclouds."And the war?" she asked. "How goes it?"Naruto's smile dimmed slightly."Slow, methodical. We're not charging in — we're building walls, spreading scouts, creating firebreaks and sealed zones. But… it feels like winning. We've got the entire Land of Wind locked in. By earth and by sea."She nodded, but her gaze remained skyward."And above? What of the skies?"Naruto glanced over."Only two flyers — the Amegake and the rogue ninja Deidera. They're covering the skies as best they can. They work in shifts, but they can't cover that much land."Koyuki's expression brightened."Then allow me to fix that."She turned and gave a subtle hand signal to one of her royal guards. The man bowed — not to her, but facing away from her — revealing the reinforced metal box strapped to his back. Koyuki stepped forward and picked up the receiver.She spoke only one word into the radio."Launch."For a second, there was only silence.Then came the roar.Not from the sea or the harbor — but from above, echoing across the frozen cliffs.Dozens of aircraft emerged from hidden mountain hangars, rising on powerful steam-thrusters and chakra-woven wings. Each resembled the airborne warship once piloted by Dōtō Kazahana — her treacherous uncle. Boxy steel bodies with four stabilizing fins and massive exhaust pipes puffed like chimneys into balloon-like gasbags above.They were both elegant and functional."They're—" Naruto began."Identical," Koyuki finished for him, "to the one my uncle used. We captured it, studied it, and improved it. The Land of Spring now boasts a fleet of thirty-six airborne support vessels, each manned by our best sky-nin."That would mean she'd made nearly three per month for the last two years since he'd been here.She folded her arms with regal satisfaction."The Land of Spring will be contributing our air superiority to this war."Camera flashes lit up to capture the moment in print just as the film crew was capturing it for television. Naruto wondered where the microphones were for the radio broadcasts.Naruto slowly turned to Madara.Even behind the mask, he could feel the man's raised eyebrow."You look impressed," Naruto said."I am," Madara replied, voice dry. "And that doesn't happen often."The light of morning filtered through the high misty peaks of Mount Myōboku, casting a soft golden sheen over the mossy stone and winding toad paths. Somewhere in the distance, a flute played — slow, ceremonial — but its serenity was shattered in an instant."Alright! We can finally leave!" Naruto shouted, practically bouncing to his feet.Sakura and Kakashi, seated nearby on an outcrop of toad-shaped stone, stirred from their moment of stillness. Even Kakashi, with his usual languid posture and half-lidded eye, perked up.They had been there a day and a half, but it felt longer. No threats. No orders. Just rest and recovery — a rare gift in a world at war. Naruto's shadow clones had kept working tirelessly on the front, but the original was fully recharged now. He had been for some time.All three wore fresh clothes brought from Konoha — neat, unbloodied, and civilian-clean. Their foreheads were banded with Leaf headbands pulled down low to cover their recently shaved scalps like bandanas, a modest attempt to reclaim dignity after the oil-and-acid debacle."Ready to get eaten by a toad again?" Naruto asked, turning toward Kakashi with a grin.Kakashi sighed."Not really. But it's that or risk bringing the Akatsuki into this sacred place. I'll take digestion over disaster.""Where exactly are we going?" Sakura asked, stretching her arms.Her knuckles cracked like fireworks. She'd had time to rest. He knew she was itching to hit something.Naruto turned, suddenly serious."Kakashi-sensei, you're needed in the southwest, just outside Suna. All the Lightning-style users are converging there, but there's a problem — shipwreck terrain. Sand, mud, twisted chakra metal. None of them can navigate it safely. And lots of enemies."Kakashi's visible eye squinted.Naruto gave him a thumbs-up."You're the one with a thousand jutsu and a whole mess of chakra control tricks. If anyone can clear a path, it's you." he said. "And we sent all the lightning users we could to take advantage of the wet terrain and enemy metal. So you're doubly suited to the task."Kakashi groaned and stood up, brushing off his pants."Well. At least I'm not being assigned babysitting duty this time."Naruto turned to Sakura."You, I'm sending where Konoha's catching the brunt of it. Central front. The trenches near the firebreak. Most of our heavy hitters are stationed there — but they're tired. You're a brawler and a healer. That combination makes you critical."Sakura nodded without hesitation."Good. I've got a few bones left unbroken. Can't let those go to waste."Kakashi raised a brow."And what about you?"Naruto grinned — but there was something behind the grin now. A flicker of resolve. Of knowledge. He tapped a finger against his temple."I'm going spelunking."Kakashi and Sakura traded glances."Deep tunnels," Naruto clarified. "We know they're spreading underground. Nobody's mapped how far yet. I'm going to find out.""You're going alone?" Sakura asked."Technically? I'm going as backup to myself," he said. "The clones are already deep. One of them reported movement from under the river systems near the Wind-Lightning border. We think they're aiming to break containment.""And if you're wrong?" Kakashi asked, arms folding across his chest."Then I come back smelling like cave mold," Naruto said, already forming the seal for summoning. "Either way, we learn something."There was no more argument. Only a final moment of stillness between the three."Stay alive," Kakashi said simply."Hit them twice for every one they land," Sakura added.Naruto grinned."I'll be sure to leave some for you."With a flicker of chakra, the massive toad-summon appeared again — mouth wide, tongue unrolling like a red carpet.And one by one, they stepped forward into the darkness.Deidara swooped low across the desert, his clay bird descending with a wheeze of deflating chakra. The moment its claws kissed sand, the creature crumbled into dust, and the blonde bomber hit the ground with less grace than usual.He staggered toward the nearest cot and collapsed onto it like a falling tree, throwing one hand skyward."Pain. Tag in," he muttered, voice raw with fatigue.The summoner path of Pain approached without ceremony and slapped Deidara's hand like a wrestler switching partners. Without a word, the other five paths followed, leaping onto the newly conjured bird as Animal Path performed the summoning jutsu. The grotesque creature let out a warbling cry, then took to the skies with all six riders in tow, vanishing into the growing storm over the desert.Only then did the medics descend.Chiyo was first, her hands glowing with soft blue light. At her side stood the usual trio: a silent Hyūga activating his Byakugan, a cloaked Aburame loosing a few scouting insects, and a sharp-eyed Inuzuka sniffing the air and listening for anomalies.None of them found any."You're clean," Chiyo confirmed, withdrawing her chakra threads with a skeptical expression. "Not a single spore. Notr scratch."Deidara scoffed"Well yeah! I spent my day flying above the battles and carpet bombing everything."She gave him a wry look."Are you sure we can't cut that mop of yours? It's a liability in spore zones."He didn't even blink."If any of you come at me with scissors, I'll kill myself and then all of you. In that order."They backed off.A Sand shinobi stepped forward, offering a small tray full of steaming rice balls."Bakudan, hot." he said.Deidara sat up, interest piqued."Ah. My favorite. How'd you know?""Your sensei told us," the shinobi said.Deidara paused just long enough to look vaguely sentimental before snapping open the lid."Tell Sasori-sensei I said thanks."The shinobi left without asking for clarification.Naruto's clone stood nearby, arms folded, watching the bomber devou his meal like he hadn't eaten in days. Overhead, the new Pain storm rolled in fast — dense black clouds roiling across the horizon, obscuring the last streaks of sunset like ink blotting parchment.Naruto turned toward it, uneasy.Then a jolt ran through him — a message from another clone snapping into place. He shot upright.Deidara froze mid-bite."What? What is it?"Naruto whipped around with urgency."Okay — stupid question, maybe. Do you know how to sculpt?"Deidara stared at him like he'd just committed an act of war.Naruto raised his hands defensively."No — I mean accurately. Like, artistically and anatomically."The look of sheer offense on Deidara's face could have melted steel.A shorter chapter than I intended, but so much happened I figured it was good enough. Also I originally had Deidera's favorite food be soba but then I remembered... Wait! Don't we actualyl have canon information on every character's favorite foods, blood types and the like? I recalled Sasuke loves Tomato's, Hinata loves cinnamon buns, and indeed, we know Deidera's. Bakudan. Rice bombs. The more you know.For those of you who never watched the movies:Spring Makersare geothermal mirror arrays developed in the Land of Spring after the events of Naruto the Movie 1, used to terraform and warm the frozen terrain.Also, A guest left a great review. I hate guest reviews because I can't respond to them directly, but I love them because they're often the best. So dear guest I hope you see this.Guestchapter 3 . Jun 17Did you leave something out on the FTG technique? Tsunade said it was being used on non-volunteers, but but wasn't Asuma and everyone else volunteers or at least aware of what they were doing?It's the non-volunteer part being important that didn't make sense especially since they all went into it knowingly so how were they non-volunteers and why did that matter? The important thing that it was experimental, caused damage and was unstable for moving a large group was good. It's Tsunade's comment that was confusing.My Response:The significance of "Non-volunteers" isn't to do with the function of the jutsu, but the legality of the Hokage's orders.The flying thunder god is a dangerous, and in my headcanon forbidden, technique and Tsunade is ORDERING them to be subjected to it. This is beyond the bounds of her authority, and she is admitting to this and trying to be apologetic about it. It's the equivalent of ordering your soldiers to cast the death reaper seal like the third Hokage did on Orochimaru, or be subjected to Hashirama cell treatment. If I were ever ordered to do any of these things I would give her a two-finger salute and say "Go FUCK your own face! ... respectfully, ma'am."In real life if you're ever given such orders, like being subjected to inhumane experiments or orders to commit war crimes, you shoot your commanding officer. Or punch him in the face and get demoted to a station on Mars.The importance of this scene is the shinobi knowingly accepting this order and their Hokage overstepping her bounds due to the severity of the situation. This is poignant for later when more horrific and grimdark orders are issued, including the two examples I mentioned earlier.This scene is probably the most important I wrote so far, and I should rewrite it to make these points clear. The first true degradation of what few moral qualms shinobi have on the path towards grimdark.

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