thought I’d get some feedback on the handful of ideas I have for the direction of the last couple chapters.
Exaggerated body expansion.
Cassandra has to deal with the side effects and repercussions from her body becoming extremely voluptuous and exaggerated.
Clothes constantly strip off without realizing
Cassandra goes about her normal life but during random moments of the day she’s unknowingly taking clothes off. it starts small: a jacket, unbuttoning her top, but eventually she’ll be in a meeting and realize she’s in bra and underwear or even naked.
Lawyer by Day, Stripper by Night
Cassandra keeps having strange vivid dreams about a seedy strip club, not realizing that when she goes to sleep her alternate stripper personality takes over. (But might be a bit too similar to Objection)
Cassandra becomes next Ms. Linder
Performing her pole dancing routine in front of an audience made her feel powerful. She becomes a dominant stripper, using her hypnotic charm to get revenge on the women who wronged her.
End with Chapter Two
Make some changes and just have the story conclude at the end of chapter 2 with her big performance.