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Ok lets get silly!!!!

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Super: INT. MODEL CITY SET - LATER

Panel 1 Wider panel, Isabelle is wearing a rather tight fitting superhero costume(what it looks like is up to you). The director is explaining to her the changes in the script. They are standing in a miniature city made of cardboard boxes.

Director “So we’ll film some new scenes later, but we’re making it that the water that spilt on you in the office was an experimental military radioactive mutagen agent. And it changed you into a super hero who can grow when she gets wet with water! And now the military has you fighting monsters to protect everyone! Your super hero name: Lady Deluge. Is this making sense?”

Isabelle “Sounds like there might be a lot of exposition needed… also this suit is pretty tight already; am I going to be growing even more?

Panel 2 The director turns to help someone into a haphazardly put together monster suit(very cheesy/visible sewing and seams, cardboard)

Director “I mean we didn’t get a film school intern to dress up to fight you and not have you grow!  You wouldn’t want to disappoint him would you?

Intern “I’m doing this for exposure and IMDB credit!”

Panel 3 Isabelle keeps trying to adjust her outfit. She’s playing along.

Isabelle “Fine. I’m sure I can get a little bigger. You know, for the film arts!”

Panel 4 Smaller Panel, the director looks intensely at the viewer 

Director “Roll sound, roll camera, ACTION!

Panel 5 We see a stylized dramatic frame from what the real film would look like if it was a blockbuster. A giant Isabelle (50-60 feet) fights a giant monster in the city.

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POSTEDMay 6, 2026
ARCHIVEDMay 6, 2026