Hi everyone, It took longer than I had anticipated, but Chapter 2 is finally here. Thanks for waiting and for the support in general!
As I had mentioned in the Look Forward post a few weeks ago, this update progresses the main story - primarily following our MC on his attempt to corrupt the athlete, Tommy Danes, with his sin(s) of choice. Plus, there are five more smaller NSFW scenes to be seen throughout his journey - see the details of these at the bottom of the post.
I've also added an extra feature and made some tweaks to the interface. Again, details of these are at the very bottom of the post.
I really hope you enjoy this update! As I mentioned at the bottom of the Look Forward post, I want to move away from writing larger corruption choices just for the sake of it and, instead, only implement scenes that make sense with the story. I started this while halfway through writing Chapter 2 and I think that, as a result, Tommy's story has a much better quality compared to Cole's. Hopefully you agree!?
Let me know your favourite route for Tommy. Mine? Sloth!
Chapter 2 includes:
Continuing MC's story in Duncreag (around 2x the word count of Chapter 1).
Tommy's corruption (5 routes).
Tommy's corruption aftermath (5 short, choice-dependent OnlyFans scenes).
1 optional short scene - MC and Duncan (his father) in the study.
1 optional tiny scene - MC and Duncan's work computer!
1 optional long scene - MC and Rex (Tommy's coach).
3 short dream scenes - Tommy vs Ethan, Henry or Yusuf.
1 tiny scene - MC and Duncan (his father) in the bathroom.
The addition of the Journal, which functions as a memory system for readers. Currently, there are very few things that can be captured in here, but it will be more useful as the story progresses.
The replacement of Envy, Sloth and Wrath's character portraits (sorry if you liked the old ones).