We're back to "Ricky" nowThis didn't change as much from the draft as I thought. It's a pivotal moment in the narrative for both Ricky and Freddy, so the centerpiece panel emphasizing them both works for me. Hopefully the dialogue reads better!I'm the biggest hater of straight lines in any image. Most of the time I freehand these perspective shots, but that's a skill that's developed over years of practice. I wish more folks would pay attention to the artificialness of straight lines and how dynamic an image can become without them