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Time for a talk with DadThe visual of Freddy over Ricky should hint that the dominant role has switched here. It really is like having a talk with dad because that's the role that Freddy is probably most self assured in!I want the reader to infer that Ricky's a bit uncomfortable here and he probably hasn't had whiskey before. With what happens later between them, the reader should always bear this page in mind: that Freddy knew to say the right thing, he just didn't follow up on it!I might have to mess around with the dialogue placement on this page a bit; let me know if it doesn't read well