So Tinhy prompted a story full of a lot of things I like. Creepy guys. Innocent girls. Public places. Peril, danger and fear!
I am sort of struggling with the POV of the story.
First Person (creep) - "I decided when I saw her that my family could wait a little longer for me to return home."
Narrator - "He decided that this was fate and and his family could wait for him to get home."
Direction - "You decided that fate has dropped her in your lap and maybe your family could wait a little bit longer for your return."
First Person (girl) - "I didn't notice that I was being stalked by a stranger who was going to take the opportunity that I was presenting him."
So...
I am going to let YOU guys give me a first line to this story. Some of you (a LOT of you) are great writers and although I guarantee that I am going to rewrite whatever you give me so I can take full credit of it (muhaha).
You don't have to use my story if you have one for yourself. It doesn't even have to be Little Lorna. (eg. the girl, Alice, Marcie etc) but I will be leading the story as Tinhy's original that he leads her into a bathroom.
Keep it short (20-150 words) and I will be starting this short story soon!