Another Alice art for you today! I still working on writing this one. This is a bit of a tough story to flesh out in advance as I don't want to get it wrong! I have toplan this FAR in advance rather than just writing it as I draw.
You have all presented so many good ideas which is both making it easier and more difficult. It is important for me to set the scene and the plot to make sure I encompass all of the things you have mentioned.
Who is the White Rabbit? Is he a recruiter? A stalker? A mysterious guide?
What is "Wonderland"? Is it a brothel? A secret society? A fantasy plane of existence?
How should the story be presented? Minimal text on each page like a modern children's book? A page of art with a page of text? The "Tales" format with floating narrative?
I have decided to do the Point Of View as Third Person Limited. The narrative is only focused on Alice's thoughts, feelings, experiences and emotions. I think that the story of Alice In Wonderland is one of adventure and discovery. I think this point of view will allow the reader to explore and feel everything Alice feels.
Maybe as a creepy diversion, I can jump into one of her attackers... I mean LOVER's heads, jumping suddenly to the first person or directive narrative.
"It was my turn next and I finally got to see the girl that every one was lining up for. She laid naked on the bed and even in her dishevelled and brutally used state, to me she looked like an angel".
"You open the door and are halted by the beautiful young girl that was laid on the bed for you. She looked like an angel and the splattering of cum all over her and the bed was like a halo that made her seem to glow and sparkle. You unzip your pants, not being able to break your gaze of Alice."