Panel 1
Ali levitating, clearly using the staff for this trick, out to where Ronni was a moment ago, camera focused on him.
AK:
Kane, are you all...
Panel 2
Camera pulls way up and back to show Ronni sleeping on the cushion of the trees, about 300 feet tall. Length of a football field, she is looking casual, relaxing, like she’s napping. SO CASUAL AND RELAXED. Not upset at all, clearly, as Ali hovers over her, a kind of tiny 1” tall or so in scale to her.
AK:
...right?
Panel 3
Ali hovering close to Ronni’s face. She looks like she is unsuccessfully trying to hide being upset, eyes closed.
AK:
Ronni, is something...
Are you okay?
Panel 4
Pull the camera back to show Ronni’s giant-sized face cracking an eye open to give the tiny warlock epic sideye.
GG:
What happened to ‘no true names’, Alexander?
Are we not doing that anymore?
AK:
We are.
I’m just a little worried about you, is all.
Panel 5
Ronni rolling over, giving giant-sized cold shoulder.
GG:
Whatever.
It’s fine.
Go play house with your big blonde girlfriend over there.
GG LOWER CASE:
You always did have a thing for tall girls.
GG:
I’ll sleep out here.
AK:
Ronni, don’t-
Panel 6
Ronni sitting up, propped up by one arm that’s flattening trees as she makes air quotes. Her expression is that of a woman scorned.
GG:
It’s ‘Kane’, remember?
The ‘Uncouth’, I believe you so eloquently put it in your backhanded defense of me.
Panel 7
Closeup on Ali registering her words, realizing You Done Fucked Up.
AK:I’m sorry, Ronni-
GG: CUTTING HIM OFF:
You wanted to go sleep by the fire?
Go sleep in it, for all I care, Chesterfield.
Panel 8
Shot of Ronni laying back down and holding herself, wrapped in her cloak, sad as Ali floats away like a coward. He said nothing of consequence
GG:
Me, I’m a hundred meters tall right now.
I’m pretty sure nothing on Urth can hurt me.
GG LOWER CASE:
Not even you.
Panel 9
Lexiii, in the foreground, nocking an arrow with murder in her eye. As behind her Ronni’s face is huge, and with that last line, she’s talking to herself as much as Lexii. Because this is night 2, and she’s pretty clear on what’s happening here. She doesn’t like it though, and while she may have nudged their relationship along, she always expected him to be The One. So this hurts on a few levels, but at least she’s not alone. Which, foreshadowing.
GG:
I appreciate it Lexii, but... no.
Just... let him go.
Panel 10
A long tear rolls down Ronni’s face in close-up as she has a little heartbreak. I leave Lexii’s reaction up to you.
GG: LOWER CASE:Just let him go.
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