The Narrator

So one of the most discussed aspects of Part One was the style of the narration. I wrote the narrator to be a bit like the devil on your shoulder, making jokes, tempting you, almost controlling you in places, breaking the forth wall sometimes and largely sarcastic. This went down well with some people, and was disliked by others. I'm writing scenes for Part Two now, so it's up to you guys, what would you like the narrator to be like?

Here's three options, feel free to discuss in the comments too.