Hey everyone! This post is for feedback on Book 1. Now that you've had time to sit with it, I want to hear your thoughts—the good, the bad, and the "what the hell were you thinking?"
Were there any scenes that felt off? Any character moments that didn't land right? Plot threads that got dropped or felt rushed? Magic system stuff that needs clarification? Pacing issues that made you want to skip ahead or felt too slow?
Lay it on me. I can't promise I'll address everything (or anything, honestly—some stuff might just be creative differences), but I read every comment and genuinely want to know what worked and what didn't. Your feedback helps me figure out what needs tweaking before this thing goes wide.
So yeah—rip it apart if you need to. I can take it.