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I like how gay this scene is; it's incredibly adorable <3.
I'm somewhat concerned about explicitly stating what is happening in the dialogue instead of demonstrating it. The general rule is 'show, don't tell,' but I was worried it might feel too unusual otherwise. I'm not entirely sure.
I often find myself conflicted about how much information to convey through dialogue. If anybody has some tips or anything please feel free to let me know.
Also I will switch to two pages per week starting now. New upload days are Monday and Thursday. (Gonna make a text post about it in a moment)