Just thought I'd share with y'all (potentially the final) update! I've went through all of the pages of the entire sequence and make a to-do list. Once complete, we should be ready to roll! Stay tuned...
pg 1
. lighting on violet’s shoulder
. wonka card edge
. ‘anything’ needs an exclamation mark
?add veruca?
pg 2
. old collar is still visible
. red tracksuit visible on chest
. increase zipper size
. move violet’s hand to the left
. bright spot on sleeve cuff
. remove bright bottom part of scarlett’s hair
. scarlett’s stomach is missing
. shadow of right side of chest
pg 3
. ?makevViolet look at hand?
. increase brightness of wonka’s speech bubble
pg 4
. veruca’s hair is too purple/pink
. add green highlight to veruca’s hair similar to the others
. show jacket material wrapping around violet instead of having the chest look overlaid
pg 5
. old hip visible behind violet’s right hip
. scarlett’s body should be tilted the other way
. missing comma in 4th speech bubble
pg 6
. remove bright dot beneath violet’s sleeve
?is speech better for violet or scarlett?
. add highlights to violet’s chest
. scarlett’s legs are missing
. add reflective highlight to violet’s right leg
pg 7/8
. shrink watermark
. add chest
. move head up
?add hand holding her chest?
. fix colouring of ball in the background at the top of the page
. remove tiny speck by left of scarlett’s head
. grandpa joe’s hair has no continuity
pg 9/10
?add characters to bottom half?
. floor isn’t consistent
. tracksuit colour isn’t consistent
. stomach too purple
pg 9
. replace shoes
pg 10
. veruca’s shoulder is on white boarder
. add shoes to violet
. make ‘oh!’ bigger than thought bubble
. veruca’s hair mask on left side
?add movement to scarlet?
. add skin dimples/texture
pg 11
. replace old veruca
. remove dark space above scarlett’s head
. add highlights to violet
. increase brightness of violet’s left hand
. change ‘enough’ to a comment that refers to her height
. zipper is too bright
. tracksuit colour is inconsistent to pg 12
pg 12
. violet’s right hand is clipping her jacket
pg 13
. missing punctuation at the end of 1st speech bubble
. fix hair length/colour to match violet’s
. wonka’s shoulder mask shows bright spot and is jagged
. inconsistent skin colour between pg13 and pg 14
. leftside: light of stomach doesn’t match chest
pg 14
. increase brightness of background lights and steam
. add colour of reflected light to violet