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Still edging ;3 over this.
Fixed up the japanese with the help of a fluent friend!! Just needed to swap out some more formal sounding words/grammar to casual ones. Plus some tonal nuances added in as well.
Fun fact, Koozo uses the first person pronoun ワシ (washi) which is usually used by older men. If youre reading Gokurakugai untranslated you'll notice the character Yoki using the same pronoun.