Ok, now I get to post the full WIP for the previous page. As you can see it would have been way too cluttered! I preferred to shuffle some things around to give the panels more room to breathe and give the page a more interesting layout. I would have had to cut out the waiter entirely, that middle row of panels just doesn't have enough horizontal space to show anything but his hand.
The one thing I think worked better in the original draft is Boomer's pissed off face being the last thing we see before the turn of the page, which builds up some intrigue. The way it plays out in the current page 14 has Jenny immediately undercut the tension, unfortunately. It does still work though, in the sense that her interruption to get the two dads to chill feels more immediate and proactive when it's not done between a turn of the page. Decisions, decisions.