August 10, 2025
NOTE: Sorry it's been a long time on this story.
Whenever we get to a more 'intense' scene, especially when I plan on it having some action, I always feel like 'it's not good enough' and feel like it's really hard to write.
'Hopefully' you guys will like this chapter. Let me know!
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FEEDBACK: Thoughts?
1. Okay, I need feedback on this chapter. Did it feel intense? (the attack, etc.) Was it lacking? (If I'm going to make improvements, it's better if I 'do that now' rather than do it later after, I've written a few more chapters. Trying to aim for a good 'build-up' in tension here. Let me know!)
2. Thoughts about Eliza's section?
3. Thoughts about the 'moment' with Mel, or the unexpected meeting?
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