It felt like the silence in the large Dining Hall lasted forever as the short redhead succubus and her taller blonde maid...
November 30, 2025
NOTE: Don't forget to comment! I need your feedback!
So far, there’s only been a few comments on the last chapter, and they were mostly skeptical, critical, or generally hesitant about this 'little ruse' being put on for Amber. If you DO like the direction this story is going for this particular scene, then please let me know.
I’ve already made adjustments to the last few chapters to try to clarify things (like emphasizing the roleplay nature of it), but I’m not entirely sure how everyone feels about the general situation. Might be that 90% of you are perfectly fine with the direction, or it might be that 90% of you don’t like it (I need to know that).
Hopefully you guys will enjoy this chapter (and if you do, let me know). I generally tried to keep your comments in mind (as much as possible) when writing it. If I need to clarify something, let me know!
Regarding the harem:
In general, all the women being introduced into the story ever since Claire and Nicole are just a casual thing (assuming they are involved with the MC), and I am generally roping in ‘the main harem’ for those scenes. So, for example, this particular scene is mostly about Serenity, Gabriella, and Miriam (the core harem) even though they are also dealing with Amber.
If anything, Amber will be a ‘means’ for them to have a fun experience, but it’s not really about the experience with Amber, it’s about the experience between MC and Serenity, or MC and Gabriella, etc.
And it's the same with Jessica. If the MC gets involved with her, it will be a more casual thing (she will be more focused on her friendship with Serenity, assuming Kai gives her a new life).
But for the other women (ever since Claire/Nicole):
Raegan? More casual, even if included (and the focus of the recent plot involving her was on Natalie, Avery, Michelle, etc. being involved). Tracey? Very casual (and focus was more on Claire). Vivian? Very casual (and focus was on Delilah, Liz, etc.). Brooke? Casual (and focus was on learning about MC’s past and how it affected Miriam). Jessica? Very casual (and focus is usually on Serenity, or Claire, etc.). Petra? Likely casual (focus is more on other women being involved in that scene, like Serenity, Avery, even Rosa, etc.). Alicia? Will be casual, if included (and focus might be more on Rachel). Amber? Also causal, if included (and focus is on Serenity, Gabriella, and Miriam).
So even if women are considered ‘a part of the harem’ (as in, they aren't involved with other guys), I’m still trying to focus on the ‘original ten’ as much as possible.
Hopefully that works for you guys?
Other notes: Immortal Supers Book 6 audiobook is available on Audible.
Combat Healer Book 1 audio should also be releasing soon-ish (few weeks).
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FEEDBACK: Thoughts?
In response to everyone's feedback, I edited the last chapter and added a bit of insight into Candy and Cherry's 'perspective,' which will hopefully help clarify the effect it is having on them (little things, like 'excitement' leaking into their aura, or how it's more of a roleplay than anything, etc.).
1. There are no plans to actually play the 'Pig Roasting' game, and the entire suggestion was just to explore the possibility itself as a theoretical idea, but how do you generally feel about it? Fine, as just an idea? (I'm generally trying to introduce Miriam's more kinky side without actually including it in the story. This is for a happy 'middle ground,' so that those who 'do like' that kinky side can know about it, while those who don't like her kinky side don't have to read about it directly. Because some people love Miriam, and some don't like her at all.)
2. Thoughts on the information learned about Amber? (I feel like the Candy/Cherry thing has eclipsed the information actually discussed regarding Amber. As mentioned at the beginning of this post, she won't be 'a part of the harem' even if they are a little involved with her sexually. And there are quite a few characters who fit in that more casual role.)
3. As you probably know, I did a poll where it was 50/50 between plot and steam. We've recently had a lot of plot involving MC's father, as well as the Werewolf Queen, etc., and I'm generally trying to aim for that 50/50 split (or maybe closer to a 40/60 split of steam vs plot -- I often try to ensure that real plot also includes a bit of romance and relationship development whenever I can). But after the next chapter (which will have a bit of steam and some interesting dynamics), it will be on to more plot. Note: Next chapter isn't meant to be just about 'sex,' and is meant to be more about the relationship aspects of those involved. Hopefully that will be fairly clear.
Definitely give me feedback, as it will probably influence the direction of the next chapter!
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