DESCRIPTION
This link is an open invite to view a VERY ROUGH copy of HSAU Act 3: Hivebent. It includes author's notes as well as quirked and quirkless sections. It is incomplete and should be considered unofficial.
WHAT I AM LOOKING FOR:
-Story Feedback
-Character Feedback
-General Critique
-Style Feedback
-Order of Events Feedback
-Sensitivity Reading
WHAT I AM NOT LOOKING FOR:
-Spellchecking
-Syntax Fixes
Please comment on this thread with anything you come away with. This entire document contains spoilers. (Obviously)