Hello All,
Please see the last part of The Tartered Dragon.
As always, let me know what you think.
UPDATE:
So there is a bit of a mixed review on the ending which is not what you want to see as a writer, so, I've added the below poll to decide what ending to stick with.
I'm not so proud that I won't change things if it makes for a better story (like I did before). Ultimately, I write as much as for myself as I do for you.
Note as well - if the Gael's POV is the one chosen, then whilst I will reset the original planning for beyond the sequel, the general fate of Planetos will be unchanged.
UPDATE: so I will change the ending which should satisfy everyone. I will do so tomorrow as it won't take too long.
Do you want me to post a new post or update this one?
UPDATE: WELL I THINK THE NEW ENDING IS RATHER FUCKING BEAUTIFUL, DON'T YOU THINK?