Demo update time! I rewrote a lot of stuff based on feedback about the first ending. Interactions with John have more reactivity based on Button’s relationship and past interactions with him, and the scene inside Nick’s head is now twice as long (with three major variations) and hopefully better reflects their sibling dynamic.
What’s New:
-Rewritten Nick Reunion, where Button gets to literally see how Nick views you. May or may not involve becoming a baby.
-Chapters 18 and 19 of the “Three Wisemen” Route, which happens if you encourage Hope to come visit you in Chicago. This includes the reunion with Hope.
(If you go the Three Wiseman route, you get the additional bonus of introducing your love interest to your family in the epilogue. Or, in the case of Sally and Gray, getting mercilessly ganged up on because the family that teases is the family that cares.)
I’m going to try to get the Sally-Hospital and Vengeance ending out tonight, but I still need to finish recoding Nick’s head scenes in those segments to reflect the rewrite. Also going to one last read-through of this month’s short stories before posting them 😊
Save files will probably work so long as they’re from before Chapter 16.
Link is the same as before: cogdemos.ink/play/bardictype/mind-blind-shard/mygame
Requested Feedback:
-Did the options when reuniting with Hope work for your character? In general, did the reunion live up to your expectations? If not, what would you like to have seen/what could be improved?
-Did Hope and John’s dynamic feel natural? They got several rewritings together, not going to lie.
-How do you feel about the reworked fake-out? I got mixed feedback from the original, so I did a little tweaking.
-What do you think of the new scenes with Nick? Do you feel that the scene did a good job of reflecting your stats/relationship with Nick? If not, what options did you feel was missing?
As before, please report any bugs/typos/miscodings to the channel on discord!