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I keep introducing more characters, but I feel like I'm not introducing them properly before moving on to the next one. It's a process that I don't know for sure I'll ever completely grasp, but I can still do research and learn better pacing in time.
this time I'm trying out having another character do the explaining. Technically I had Chit and Richard talk about Jay a bit before, but it never went into detail and I feel like that lost some people, I'm trying to be more specific about what has happened in the past.