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Since the poll is no longer ongoing, I can post the intermediate versions without worrying about the incomplete work affecting it.
I think Liora's pose appears a bit too sexy for the story start.
UPDATE: Deniis addressed my concerns with an update to the sketch. One version that's a bit more held back with the arm at the mouth, the other a bit more open. I'm happy with both of them, so I will be making a quick vote (1 Day Time Limit since it's not a major difference.)
Version A
Version B
Rean also moved a bit closer here to make it easier to represent smaller dick sizes with progressing illness at the later stages.