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Rimelion: [Book 4] [329. Point, Present, Choose]

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The lead ship’s hull came around in a slow, controlled arc and slid toward the bank with the patience of something much smaller than it was. Sailors ran along the deck. A gangway dropped with a wooden thump that carried across the gravel. Luna’s feet started moving before her brain had finished negotiating with them, and the rest of her team fell in around her, Lisa keeping pace with bright-eyed interest, Ian half a step behind, Fty trailing in the rear.

Three figures waited at the foot of the gangway.

Katherine was the easiest to spot. The greatsword across her back caught the gray light in dull bronze flashes, and she was rocking on her heels in a way that suggested she had been standing still for approximately three minutes longer than she preferred.

Lola was beside her. Clipboard against her chest. The suit she wore when she wanted people to take notes about how she was taking notes about them.

And Mila—

Mila and Lola were arguing.

The angle of Lola’s clipboard had shifted from chest-level to slightly raised, and Mila’s hands were locked behind his back in the precise grip that meant he was holding onto his composure with both fists.

“—not what we agreed,” Lola was saying as Luna got close enough to hear.

“You yourself said this was the best course of action, Your Grace.”

“I said it was an option.”

“You said—”

Mila’s eyes flicked past Lola’s shoulder. He saw Luna. The argument stopped mid-syllable, and the flicker of a smile crossed his face, and this time it almost made it all the way to his mouth.

“Lady Lunaris.” He inclined his head. “Nice to see you again.”

Ahoj!

Katherine’s grin came at her like a thrown thing. She covered the distance in two long strides, and Luna had half a second to brace before Katherine clapped her on the shoulder hard enough to rock her sideways. The mantle flared silver. Katherine grinned wider and walked straight past her toward the rest of Luna’s team, already announcing herself to the air.

“Stupid law!” she was saying loudly to no one in particular, possibly to the river itself. “Stupid, stupid law! When study at school? BORING. Here? I, paperwork—”

“Katherine—” Lisa was already laughing.

Paperwork, Lisa! On boat!”

Luna watched her go for a second longer than she needed to, mostly because looking at Katherine was easier than looking at Lola and Mila, both of whom were still standing there, and one of whom was the woman Luna had been trying to impress since the day Charlie had given her a class.

She turned back.

Her right hand traced a small ghost-line through the air. She made it stop. “What—” Her voice came out higher than she had meant. She cleared her throat. Tried again. “What’s the problem?”

Lola lowered the clipboard back to chest-level. The administrator-gloss reset like a snapped seam. “The General is unhappy with his army.”

“I am unhappy,” Mila said evenly, “with changes at last notice.”

“Which the Crown understands, and for which the Crown apologizes.” Lola did not look at Luna while she said this, which Luna recognized as administrative kindness. “But every Doan needs a first deployment. Every officer corps needs an inaugural engagement. That is not a thing that can be scheduled around comfort.”

“It is a thing that can be scheduled around briefing windows, Your Grace.”

“It is.”

“Which were not used.”

“They were not.”

Luna took half a step backward.

Luna wanted to put Lola between herself and whatever came next, the way she had put NightSwallow between herself and bad situations approximately a hundred times before. She drifted left. The mantle moved with her like a co-conspirator.

Lola, without looking, took a clean half-step sideways.

Luna found herself standing alone in front of Mila.

The mantle, traitor that it was, settled around her shoulders in a way that almost certainly looked composed. “Wh-what—” Luna started, and stopped, and started again. “What will I be doing?”

Lola turned, finally. “Charlie has combined the elites of the standing army into a single deployable formation. The Rimebreak Doan. Four thousand soldiers. Veteran officers from the southern campaigns under the empire, integrated with our Altandai recruits.” Her tone had shifted into the gentle one, the one she used when she was telling Charlie something she knew would land hard. “They will be under your command, Lunaris. This is their first deployment.”

The river hushed against the gravel.

“Under—”

“Yes.”

“My—”

“Yes.”

“Four—”

“Four thousand.”

Luna’s hands had stopped moving entirely. Her hip had stopped its small, habitual sway. The whole ambient choreography of her body had gone still in a way it almost never did, and the stillness felt unnatural enough that she became aware of her own breathing, which was happening a little fast.

She looked at Mila.

Mila looked back. The smile had retreated. What was left was his standard grim mouth. “Lady Lunaris.” His voice was clipped and steady. “I will be commanding the army. How it moves. Which Banner advances. Which Column holds. Which File rotates. The tempo of the engagement is mine. You will not be asked to manage it.”

“...Okay.”

“You will be asked to decide what we are doing, and why. Which target. Which objective. Whether to engage, to withdraw, or to hold.” His head tilted, fractionally. “When you point, I will present choices. Usually three. Sometimes two. Each will have costs. You will choose. The army will execute.”

Luna stared at him.

“You point,” Mila said again, slower. “I present. You choose.”

“Point. Present. Choose.” Luna repeated it. Her voice had gone bright and small at once. “Right. Yes. Point. Present. Choose.”

“Yes.”

She turned to Lola. “Why not you?”

It came out before she could stop it. Plaintive. The mantle felt heavier than it had a second ago, and her right hand had found the rapier grip without her permission. She made herself take it off.

“Because when this is finished,” Lola said, “there will be a war with the empire. And the kingdom will need senior officers in the field, and senior administrators behind them, and we cannot have the same person filling both chairs.”

“Lola—”

“Charlie trusts you to command, Lunaris.”

Luna’s mouth opened.

Lola did not let her use it. “She trusts you. She had a long conversation with the General about this, and at the end of it, she told him your name. You. Specifically.” Lola’s eyes were warm and very steady. “And you promised her that you would carry it with honor. Today is part of carrying it.”

Luna closed her mouth.

Her right hand, the rapier hand, traced a single small ghost-line through the air, and this time she let it. The motion was steadying. The mantle settled across her shoulders the way water finds its level, and somewhere in the very back of her chest, the tempo, the leader-tempo from yesterday, started up again at a quieter beat.

She nodded.

“Then that will be all,” Lola said briskly, the warmth folding back beneath the administrator-gloss without seam or trace. She tucked the clipboard under her arm. “I am leaving with Captain Lucy upstream. There are other difficulties along the river that the Crown needs to assess in person. The General has the deployment from here.” Her eyes met Luna’s for one full second. “You will do well, Lunaris.”

“Lola—”

But Lola had already turned.

She walked up the gravel toward the smaller of the navy ships moored along the bank, the one with the snowflake banner snapping above its sterncastle, and as she got closer Luna could hear, drifting down on the wind, Lucy’s voice, full pirate, full theatrical, in mid-stream.

“—aye, ye scurvy lubber, that line ain’t goin’ tie itself, now is it? Move yer feet afore I move ‘em fer ye!”

Lola did not break stride. Luna watched her go as her mantle moved on Luna’s shoulders. Behind her, Katherine was now shoulder-slapping Ian, who had apparently made the mistake of being within arm’s reach.

Luna turned back to Mila. Her hip had started swaying again, just slightly, without her permission.

“Okay,” she said. Her voice had gone tight and bright. The tempo was up. “Point. Present. Choose.”

“Yes, Lady Lunaris.”

“...Show me my army.”

The Doan was already assembling when Mila turned them away from the gangway and led her down the gravel.

The miasma sat on the southern horizon as a thin gray smudge, here at the bank the air was clean. Sailors were running supplies down a second gangway. Quartermasters were shouting at each other.

Three of Mila’s aides walked half a pace behind, and beside them, in a deep blue coat with the snowflake at the collar, walked a man Mila had introduced once and not again — Doan-Commander Ostan, gray at the temples, scarred along the jaw.

“Four Banners,” Mila said. He gestured forward.

Luna looked.

The gravel beyond the supply line had been cleared, and on it, in four neat blocks that were still settling into themselves, the elite of Rimebreak’s standing army was forming up.

“First Banner. The Frontline.” The heaviest formation, plate and polearms, shields stacked in tidy rows beside their bearers. “Wolf Doan veterans, with knight-class soldiers salted through every Column for anti-undead work. Their task is the line. Death Knights at this tier do not break good lines. We will give them lines that do not break.”

“Okay,” Luna said. Her voice had gone bright.

“Second Banner. Mage artillery.” A smaller block, robes layered over light armor, organized into three Columns, each Column with its Column-Lieutenant standing slightly forward. “Volley fire. The Lieutenant calls cadence. Used properly, a Column of fire mages clears a courtyard in three volleys. We brought six Columns.”

“Oh,” Luna’s eyebrows went up. “Oh, that’s—okay. That’s a lot.”

“It is the math, Lady Lunaris. We picked the math we wanted.”

She grinned, and Mila let the corner of his mouth move in something that was almost certainly a smile.

He kept walking.

“Third Banner. Scouts and skirmishers. Light infantry, rangers, archers. They will harass the enemy flanks, eliminate softer targets, necromancers, casters, command nodes, and feed information back up the line. They are the reason I will be able to give you real choices in real time.”

“Fourth?”

“Support. Healers, ward-mages, engineers. The reserve File can be committed to plug a breach. The engineers will breach the wall when you decide we have the opening.”

“When I decide.”

“When you decide.” Luna’s right hand traced a small ghost-line in the air, longsword-pattern, automatic.

Behind them, somewhere near the supply wagons, a yelp went up, Ian’s voice, pitching panicked and high, followed by a bright cackle that could only have come from Katherine. Lisa was wheezing in the middle distance.

Luna’s mouth twitched. She did not turn around.

Mila’s eyes flicked over her shoulder once, and the smile thing happened again, a fraction further along this time before he settled it back down. “What about flying units?” Luna asked.

“None.”

“None?”

“I considered it. The transport cost is significant—wing-beasts require dedicated handlers, dedicated rations, dedicated stalls aboard ship. We could have brought perhaps a single File at the cost of half a Column of supplies.” He shook his head once. “And the miasma. Beasts of the air do not tolerate it. I have lost riders to similar corruption we will be marching into. I will not field assets that will die before they reach the wall.”

Luna nodded slowly.

She had stopped walking. Her eyes had gone past Mila to the First Banner, where four hundred spearmen were running a drill in the open square, synchronized thrusts, the whole Column moving as one, the sound of the haft-grips landing in unison like a single deep heartbeat.

Step. Thrust. Recover. Step. Thrust. Recover.

The tempo registered in her body before her brain caught up. Her right hand traced another ghost-line, longer this time, the rapier-pattern.

“Lady Lunaris?”

“Why,” she said slowly, “do they all thrust at the same time?”

Mila paused. “Pardon?”

“They thrust together. Step, thrust, step, thrust. Same combat beat.” She gestured toward the formation. The bright energy was tumbling now, the words coming faster. “Wouldn’t it be—I mean—if I were on the other side, I’d hear that, right? Same rhythm every time. I’d know exactly when the next thrust was coming. So I’d time my dodge or my parry or my counter, every time, every single time. Why don’t they roll it? Stagger it? Make it so the enemy never knows which spear is coming next?”

Mila looked at her. Behind him, two of the aides had also gone still. “Doan-Commander,” Mila said, without turning his head.

Ostan stepped up beside them. He looked at Luna with the careful attention of a man being asked to teach. “My lady.”

“What is the answer?”

“The synchronization is not for the enemy, my lady.” Ostan’s voice was unhurried. “It is for the line. Four hundred spears thrusting together press the enemy back. Four hundred spears thrusting at different moments do not press the enemy back; they irritate him.” A pause. “The line is the weapon. The thrust is only the edge.”

“Oh.” Luna’s hand stopped its ghost-line. “Oh.”

“Your instinct is not wrong, my lady.” Ostan tilted his head, considering. “It is a duelist’s instinct. In single combat, predictable rhythm is death. In the line, predictable rhythm is life. The men beside you must know when your spear will move so they can move theirs with it. Otherwise the line breaks in the middle. Which is where we usually die.”

“…So the spear is part of a wall. Llama would be proud.”

“The spear is part of a wall.”

Luna nodded, slowly. Her hip swayed, just slightly. “Okay. Okay, that—yeah. So if the order was press, you want the synchronized thrust. But if I needed them to harass, to keep an enemy guessing, to confuse a tempo—“

“Then I would shift them to skirmish formation, my lady. Different doctrine. Different drill.” Ostan stopped his smile. “We have both.”

“Right. Of course you do.” She looked back at the spearmen. “Sorry. That was—I should have figured that out.”

“It was a good question, Lady Lunaris,” Mila said.

She blinked at him. “Really?”

“Really.”

The smile crossed his mouth one more time, and behind him Luna saw the youngest aide, the blond one with the careful moustache, glance sideways at the older aide and lean in just slightly. “He has a daughter now,” the older aide murmured, soft enough that it was clearly not meant for her to hear.

The blond aide closed his eyes briefly. “Goddess help us all.”

Luna pretended very hard that she had not heard either of them.

She looked at the army.

The Doan was assembled.

Four thousand soldiers, four Banners, in disciplined squares on the gravel, every soldier wearing his parent Doan’s emblem with a small additional badge above it, marking them as seconded to the elite. Wolves and bronze sunbursts and sheaves of arrows and broken chains, all standing under one composite mark, the kingdom’s whole hand closed into a single fist.

Luna stopped breathing for a second. “Lady Lunaris.” Mila’s voice was steady. “When you give the word, we march.”

Luna swallowed.

Her right hand traced one small ghost-line through the air. She thought about Charlie, standing in the Grand Hall, saying I trust you to make the right decision on the ground.

She nodded.

“March.”

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