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Rimelion: [Book 4] [343. Old Mok]

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The village smelled of woodsmoke and crushed green, and the deeper Red Beads led us the more it climbed; homes woven into living trunks on three tiers, rope walkways strung between them like a cat’s cradle some giant had given up on halfway through, little glass lanterns swaying on cords with a pale river-light caught inside them.

The whole tribe had come out to look, and every broad green face on every level was tracking exactly one of us.

For once, gloriously, not me.

“Spirit,” they whispered up and down the bridges. “Spirit come. Tork tork.”

“They’re still doing it,” Yuki said out of the side of her mouth, ears pinned flat, tails fanned so bright the nearest lantern looked embarrassed.

“They’re going to keep doing it. Wave. Spirits wave.”

She waved. It was a small, stricken, deeply historian sort of wave, half apology, and the Torks lost their collective minds over it; a wave of joyful chittering rolling up through the trees as the gesture got relayed to anyone who’d missed it.

Then the crowd parted, and the oldest Tork I had ever seen—and I exploited a lot in one Tork village, but it was a hostile one—came down the central trunk-stair at a speed no one that ancient had any right to manage.

He was knee-high to the rest, which made him roughly ankle-high to Llama, draped in so many strings of beads and bone and dried river-flowers that he rattled with every step, and a single enormous moth-wing headdress wobbled over his eyes. He fetched up in front of Yuki, planted a staff taller than he was, tipped the headdress back, and looked up. And up.

And his face cracked open.

[Old Mok, the Speaker Lv. 37]Type: 3-rare | HP: 410/410

“AH,” said Old Mok, the Speaker, with a force. “AH. Spirit. True spirit. Dawn-tail. Mok wait—Mok wait whole life—Mok knew, Mok TOLD them—” he jabbed his staff back at the tribe, who nodded along like this was very much on the record “—and they say Mok old, Mok dream. Now LOOK.” he whirled back to Yuki, beads clattering. “You wait. You WAIT. Mok prepare. Big prepare. Do not—do not spirit away. Yes?”

“I—yes? I’ll—I won’t spirit away,” Yuki said, and Mok beamed at her, patted her on the knee with enormous gravity, and went rattling off back up the stairs shouting orders in a language that was mostly the word for fire.

The tribe scattered, and somewhere a drum started.

Yuki turned to me with an ashen face. “Charlie. Charlie, he’s preparing. What is he preparing?”

“A party, I think.” I steered her by the elbow toward a quieter root, out from under the worst of the staring, and dropped my voice. “Listen. Don’t panic.”

Yuki's ears moved up, but then flattened again. “That is the single worst way to start any sentence you have ever started a sentence with. Even during the second treaty of Altandai feast, the black grandmaster said—”

“Yuki?” I smiled.

She nodded. “I’m doing it again, right?”

“It’s okay, you can tell me all about rude sentences later. Listen. They think you’re a forest spirit. We could spend an hour explaining bloodlines and inheritance trials and the difference between a divine fox and a historian who happens to glow, and at the end of it they’d still think you were a spirit being modest. Or—” I let the or hang on a borrowed Phèdre pause, just to watch it work “—you lean into it. Be gracious. Glow a little. Let them have their evening.”

Her tails drooped. “That feels like lying.”

“It’s not lying; it’s diplomacy. The lie is when there’s no fox bloodline. There’s a fox bloodline. You were in the Labyrinth and a spirit chose you.” I bumped her shoulder. “You earned the ears, Yuki. Wear them on purpose for one night.”

She chewed her lip, and her voice went quiet. “I keep thinking they’re going to look closer and see I’m just—the one who reads things. The utility one.”

“The utility one flushed eight armed Torks out of a treeline with a snap of her fingers and didn’t hurt one of them. I was there.” I crossed my arms. “Speaking of which—you still have the trial reward, don’t you?”

The ears went lower. Caught. “It’s—it’s still sealed. It said recognition required, and I didn’t—I didn’t know what that meant, and it felt presumptuous to keep checking, so I just sort of.” She made a small, folding gesture. “Filed it.”

“You filed a legendary.”

“It seemed rude to keep poking at it!”

I like this girl. I genuinely do.

“Tonight, if it feels right—try it. That’s all. No pressure.” Which was a lie, because I had a fairly strong suspicion about what recognition required meant, and I had just walked her into the most recognition she was ever going to get.

The drum got louder.

By full dark the clearing had become a different place.

The Torks had built up a bonfire in the central ring taller than Mok’s stair, and it threw orange light climbing all the way up into the canopy, turning the woven homes into a hanging city of shadow and gold. They’d laid out food on broad leaves, like roasted river-fish, charred tubers, something purple that Yuki identified, mid-bite, as “oh, that’s actually a fascinating cultivar, the staining suggests—” before remembering she was eating it.

Phèdre had folded herself onto a root beside her, coat pooling, and was watching Yuki narrate the purple cultivar with the patience of a cat at a fishbowl. “You see, mon cœur,” she murmured. “You are adored, you are fed, and a man with a moth on his head has organized an entire festival in your honor. And still you find a way to lecture about vegetables. It is a gift.”

“It’s not a lecture, it’s context—”

“It is perfect. Do not change a thing.” Phèdre’s scarf trailed off her shoulder and settled across Yuki’s, light as a breath, and Yuki forgot the rest of the sentence entirely.

Luminaria stood at the fire’s edge with her staff planted and her chin level, looking every inch the lead actress of a divine opera who had merely consented to attend a smaller production.

A Tork toddler had attached itself to the hem of her robe and was using it as a swing. She was pretending, with magnificent and total dedication, not to notice, and the muscle in her jaw was working very hard, and I gave her about four more minutes before Lady Luminaria giggled in public for the first time in recorded history.

Llama had positioned himself between the fire and the largest cluster of children, arms crossed, surveying. “The pit is too close to the western root cluster,” he announced to no one. “One spark in dry bark and the whole tier is gone.”

A small Tork solemnly offered him a charred tuber.

He looked at it. He took it. He ate it without changing expression and went back to disapproving of the architecture, and the child treated this as the highest honor of its life.

Lucy turned up halfway through, drawn by the fire and the food and the simple gravitational pull of a crowd she could perform for. She dropped onto a log, accepted a fish, and ate it in wounded silence for almost a full minute before a passing Tork patted the hammer across her back and said warmly, “Big-trunk lady.”

“It is a ship,” Lucy told the fire.

“Big-trunk lady eat. Good.” The Tork moved on, deeply satisfied.

Lucy looked at me. I looked very hard at my fish.

I clocked NightSwallow exactly once all evening; a flat place in the dark past the fire’s reach where the shadows lay too smooth, two points of reflected orange that blinked when a child wandered too close to the treeline and steered, somehow, gently back toward the light. “The lady of night watches,” the dark said.

I let her keep the post. It was the only way she knew how to sit at a party.

Then Mok climbed onto the broad flat stone at the head of the fire, raised his staff, and the drum stopped.

The clearing went still, hundreds of green faces turning up to him, firelight pooling in every pair of eyes. He let the silence sit, old showmen everywhere have the same instinct, and then he turned, and pointed his staff at Yuki, and the reverence in it landed on her like a weight.

“Spirit,” Mok said, and his voice turned formal. “Dawn-tail. Tork honor you. Tork feed you, sing you, light fire for you. Now Tork ask. One thing. Spirit grace.” He spread his ancient arms wide. “Grant Tork wish. Show us—show us you true.”

The clearing held its breath.

Yuki had gone very pale. Her hands were doing the complicated apologetic thing in the air, her tails clamped flat, and she shot me a look across the fire that was Charlie, Charlie, what do I do, they want a miracle, I don’t have a miracle, I have footnotes—

I didn’t say anything. I just nodded. You earned the ears. Wear them on purpose.

And something in her settled.

I saw her stop being scared and decide to be brave instead, which with Yuki are never far apart. She set down the purple tuber with enormous care, as if it mattered, as if the world might judge how she put down a vegetable, and she stood.

She breathed in. And the light came.

Not the scouring flood she’d loosed on the treeline. This was slow, dawn coming up out of her, gold and rose, pouring off her three tails until each one was a banner of standing light, until the bonfire looked dim beside her, until every shadow in the clearing fled up into the canopy and the whole village stood washed in something that was not quite morning and not quite fire.

The Torks made a sound I’ll never forget, low and wondering, hundreds of voices catching at once.

Yuki rose onto her toes. Then off them entirely, a clean step into the air, light folding under her feet like she’d found a stair no one else could see, three meters up, tails spread, hanging there against the dark.

And she reached into nothing, opened her hand, and called. The system answered before the light did and Yuki shared the weapon with us.

[The Dawnfox Mirror]Quality: 7-legendary (Sealed → Unlocked.)ATK: 78-96 (light)Restriction: Sun Fox’s Inheritor onlyInfo: Scaling, scaled to level 30Description: A blade of borrowed dawn, woven from the art the Sun Fox died defending. The Dawnfox Mirror keeps that art. Its surface returns only what is true; an illusion throws no reflection in it, and what it cuts, it shows before it wounds. What it mirrors, it can become. To raise The Dawnfox Mirror is to let truth and trick trade places at the bearer’s word.

The sealed lock broke with a sound like a struck bell, and the blade came into her hand out of the air itself. The blade was glass, or well, as it said, dawn poured into the shape of glass and told to hold an edge.

It was wholly translucent, so clear you could read the fire straight through it. And along every translucent inch of it, scrolling, turning, sinking and surfacing through the depth of the blade ran hundreds upon hundreds of tiny runes, each one a separate mote of gold. The crossguard swept back into two long curves like a fox at full stretch.

The pommel was a small bright fox-mask.

Super cute.

Yuki held it up, and it lit the entire village to noon.

The Torks came apart completely. They were on their feet, on the bridges, leaping, chittering, some of them weeping openly, Mok hammering his staff against the stone and howling something that needed no translation. Children pointed. Old Torks pressed their faces to the rope rails. The light off the Dawnfox Mirror climbed the trunks and turned the hanging city to fire and gold, and for one long ringing moment Yuki hung three meters above a forest holding a sword made of morning, and was, completely and unmistakably, a goddess.

She looked terrified and radiant.

The light eased. She came down slow, boots finding the earth, the sword still burning soft in her grip, and the cheering rolled on and on, and I caught Phèdre wiping at one eye with the back of a finger and pretending, smoothly, that it was smoke.

Then Mok raised his staff again, and the clearing quieted, because the showman wasn’t finished. He bowed to her. Low, all the way, beads pouring off him to pool in the dirt.

“Spirit grant grace,” he said, and his old voice had gone fierce and wet and grateful and desperate, all at once. “Tork ask. Tork beg.” He lifted his head, and the firelight caught every line of an ancient face that had clearly been waiting a very long time to ask this of someone who could answer.

“Spirit kill swamp dragon.”

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