Aiden's transformation is "finished" for now; we don't see the small wolf's traits fading completely; they probably did throughout the hours as he kept sleeping. I just didn't feel like showing every little thing.
Also, I wanted to call back into the "bonus pic" I did for Becoming Wolves Chapter 1, which, at the time, my idea was about Aiden waking up in Gary's backyard, not the bedroom, which I ultimately chose. It's a small retcon, but the previous pic being a "bonus pic" I don't find it so critical.
And yeah, the Title Card here acts as a separation between the "storytelling" of Aiden's narration and the proper start of the story. There was so much I could keep saying with his voice-over before it would become boring, I would say. And I also like the old school movie presentation when the Title Card would show up a few moments after a cold open.
As for page 14, I just wanted to start with the revelation right away instead of him waking up from the bed. You can assume he ran into the bathroom, wobbling and googly-eyed just to pee, before the shocking revelation.
Anyway, I hope you like it, let me know what you think :)