Cheeky little 14k I finished up finally. Had to work on a lot of things to get this one right, and I've only just finished it.
Cheeky little 14k I finished up finally. Had to work on a lot of things to get this one right, and I've only just finished it. If there's any mistakes that stand out to you, feel free to use the comment function of the document to make your comments. There's almost certainly a few, and I'm always grateful for the extra eyes, because I'm word-blind after I finish these chapters.This is the lore-accessible possibility that doesn't get talked about much, and was kind of gently alluded to much earlier on.We're on an adventure, now.PDF below if desired.Document for reading/commenting:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1wsa9wNHncT3UKkNDuwYHtW_adPyvq7UIY91xCDnLP5E/edit?usp=sharing
Remember, you get this way ahead of everyone else, so mind the spoilers for them. Though you can allude (gently) if you comment in other places. If there's anything you like/dislike, we can also talk here about it, as maybe there's just something I'm not considering or thinking about. Otherwise, this should be a gooooood chapter.