This is the largest chapter to date, by no small margin. (30k words)That being the case, be aware I've had to reconstruct it a couple times, so there may or may not continuity errors. I think I caught most of them, but if anything really weird stands out point it out and all that as necessary.Note that time changes between scenes (some a little forward, some a little back) are not the continuity errors I'm referring to. There's just a lot happening in one evening. Never forget to read between the lines.Bear with me for mistakes. However many mistakes are usually in a chapter, note that this chapter is triple-chapter-length, and that means threefold the potential mistakes and potential editing necessary. This may be a process, so just bear with me. Hahaha.As always, the link below is directly to a document. Use the PDF if you need to expand its size a bunch or something, and make sure in the link below you do not highlight the entire document, as that leaves it that way and messes with the viewing experience for other people. :)
Otherwise, thank all as always for being here. I hope you appreciate. You da best.https://docs.google.com/document/d/1QPSMyZA781YVErDJGKTET3VAKgMjA3-IptqTfBDIdmo/edit?usp=sharing