EXCLUSIVE PREVIEW ~ I need your help!! (description for more info)

So I filmed this recently, and I LOVED the idea and visuals, but after listening to the audio track, I wasn't a fan of a few things... first there are a lot of bumping sounds. Second, my voice is too loud and not ASMR-y. Still, I wanted your input on what I could fix or what I should change. **THIS IS NOT THE FULL VIDEO**

I appreciate all of your feedback so much, I trust it a lot! Lots of love, and looking forward to reading what you have to say ❤️