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One thing I would like to discuss is about the graphical violence for this story. In the last panel of this batch you can see a character receiving a really hard punch. I had three choices:
-Making it very gruesome, teeth and blood flying from the mouth.
-Making a very deformed and funny face, eyes popping out like a tom and jerry cartoon
-Or making them moan and sweat a lot, still keeping the faces beautiful and sexy.
I chose the third and a bit of the second. Of course, it loses a lot of impact, but I can use the 1st choice for some key moments. What do you think of all this?