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I'm pretty sure that I'll be doing some more work tomorrow - possibly adding an Epilogue, a final POV chapter for Dameon during the fight, and maybe splitting the current last chapter in two to give Naomi and Scorio some downtime and rest before they fly away to the Red Keep.

What else stuck out at you as either elements you'd like clarified, points of confusion, or plot points I dropped (like Plassus's treasure space)? Are there any parts of the book that struck you as needing work, or further elaboration? Any feedback before I dive into edits tomorrow would be most welcome!

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POSTEDSep 18, 2025
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