Hey guys! I’ve had another very busy week writing. I finished one of the five “problem scenes” remaining: which was more complicated than expected, because I realised that I needed an extra scene before it to make it work (this is now also completed).
It’s really hard to explain what I’m doing without spoilers 😭 but over the past few days I fixed some scenes that weren’t quite landing because I didn’t know exactly why they were there. I thought in a lot more detail about how they fit into the heroine’s overall story and development in Bangkok and the answers just clicked into place; things are feeling a lot more narratively coherent to me now. I’m really excited about it.
Short report because I worked until 1930 and I’m starving. I need to eat, get an early night, and get straight back to work on it tomorrow. 🦀❤️🔥