sorry for the week long delay!! I had to redraw it a few times since I wasn't happy with it, and that really killed my momentum, but now it's fine enough I think. I've tried organizing the alts a bit better also, so that went well
overall, it's still not quite as good as I want it compositionally, but this is about as far as I'll get on it without some major revisions
I'm discovering more and more things about my process that I want to correct, things like how I want to be less clean and more loose with lines and focus more on rendering; recently I've tried to stop relying on overlay as much by focusing more on the individual color balance, and i think it's been going decently well enough.
Any constructive feedback would be appreciated!
(also, sorry for not cropping earlier for the timelapse 💦 not drawing with composition already in mind is another thing that i need to fix!!)