Warning: Very messy. Cut somewhere in middle because my brain stopped working. May have a spoiler of future main chapter plot. Bald character (just guess who is who by their dialogues)
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1. very first 70/cont of ch 69 (i think I stopped because it's too depressing/i have to deal with drawing drama again and then frustrated)
-ended here.
2. Alt 1 of ch 70, probs similar to the fixed chapter, taken some panel from last part above^^^
---even I forget there's NSFW in this part hahahahah
I think I stopped because to reach this part I already spend like 15ish panels with no plot advancing o)---(
But i really like the part where yolka fucking andra every night because of jealousy and andra enjoying it and subtle-ly using ravi to make yolka pound him every night //cough
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3. alt 2 of ch 70, still similar panels
--this is all, IDK why I stopped but anyway I liked that panel where andra yanked ravi's hair violently 😂😂 after this part is supposed to be the part where yolka interrogate ravi about the 'proposal' he mentioned, but then I think if I did write about it (and not just mention it in passing like in actual chapter 70) it will take another chapter until we got to andra family home 🥲🥲 so this alt is cancelled..
4. Alt 3 of ch 70, where I changed the opening scene of ravi+yolka to ->>andra's family POV
this is all for the last alt, which some panels is included to the finished_fix_fix_ch70 😂But andra's family is way meaner. I decided to change it so that poor andra didn't get attacked by his own family but instead attacking yolka.
That is all, the alt 4 is the one that become the real chapter in the end:
Usually when I used the big storyboard like this instead of the normal one-strip page (800x30000px one) I'm already stressed😂
This is all I'm showing to show you why ch70 took so long. I keep making alternatives and too much thinking. I need to break this habit .____.
But when I got a writer's block, or story block, I just keep making these alt and hope to make a breakthrough(from the block) instead of thinking it thoroughly and stick with just one scenario. It become a weakness in the end...🥲🥲 or maybe my storytelling just deteriorates.
But oh well, the chap is done.
Hope you enjoyed it! Everyone is bald hahahahaha