Hey guys, I'd like to get some input on the One Piece story

Since chapter 3 has gotten a grand total of 0 comments, I'm assuming no one liked it. Would you guys mind telling me what about it was so bad? I'm not opposed to rewriting it and making it better.

I'd also love some input from you guys on some aspects of the story. For instance, what do you guys think the discovered Devil Fruit should be? Is the idea of Kaiden unknowingly having Uranus a horrible idea? Because he honestly has no idea, at all.

If you guys just don't like it, well, that's that I guess.