So I didn't really intend to do another re-write, but I wanted to continue the family of tomorrow...and then looked back at where I left off and cringe. Part 4 was...wow, not well written technically, while it pushes the story forward the amount of errors was pretty bad...so yeah I went back at it. I'm also using a new spell checker called Grammarly which really does help spot some more mistakes, but its being used sparingly to fix errors in stead of using the whole "rewrite a ton of sentences" option that rips stuff out.
Want to again remind everybody that I'm going on a month long hiatus in 10 days, i'll try and deliver something else before I stop.
Cheers, everybody
Sam!
https://sammoose.home.blog/2025/10/04/the-family-of-tomorrow-part-4-re-write/
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