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Here's another penciling pass on the same art. Seems a bit later, since there's glasses. Maybe this one's out of sequence with the others I have scheduled? (the others don't have glasses) Dunno! File data is tricky.
But Joyce's arms are lowered down a bit. And there's a Dorothy there now, obviously.
Eagle-eyed readers might recognize this composition from the final page of the "Friend of Dorothy (the Biggest)" Slipshine comic! This was something I repurposed later.