Were you guys overall satisfied with the R-rated scene in chapter 71?
I feel that I should go back and change the chapter to add more anticipation, more teasing before the 'act'. Since this is the major scene we've been building up to, I felt like it needed a bit more oomph...like a pre-sex shower scene, coming full circle to the earlier chapters.
What do you guys think?
P.S: I sound like a broken record, but I'm sorry that the chapters aren't coming out as quickly as I want it to. After next week, I will only have one exam left (rather than being drowned by the eight major assessments like I am now), and there will be christmas break after that, so I should have more time to write then. For now, it may just be a chapter per week for this week and next week. Gomenasai.