sry for going quiet mode during the writing phase,
i kno the whole point of this is to be transparent and share all my wips as im going along but i feel like Writing Wips are a lot less interesting and enjoyable than Art Wips because at least with art wips u get to see huge titty
((i think in future ill be more comfortable sharing my writing process as im going along but jumping right into it and coming up with my first screenplay since forever in just a couple of days has had me going aaaaaaaaaAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA))
but keeping that in mind,, I DID IT! and ✨ive attached a first draft✨
i kinda want to simplify the middle chunk MAJORLY somehow, i think its cool that its this whole ass story n stuff but i think tonally i want the content we make here to be a bit dummer and funner so preferably when we make the animatic we can re-approach this in an even goofier way
i also want to keep the whole thing under 5 minutes and im worried that this script might be going over that,, potentially we could break this animation in two parts but id rather be able to just finish this one so we can move onto more new fun spicy content 💖
anyway give it a cheeky read if u so wish, there will be sketches for the storybeats soon and some cheeky votes for how we approach things,, generally based around that funny script