Hello! I'm glad to be back in the swing of things :) I feel refreshed and lighter knowing chapter 4 is done (aside from the errors and stuff but unfortunately it's just me right now
Anyway! Because I worked on chapter 4 so long and worked and reworked it I have so many deleted scenes just sitting in my files. I thought it'd be nice to share what I know I won't use once in a while.
This Seven deleted scene is short (2.6k words) but it's what would've been the start of the talk on the bus. My original idea was honestly a mess and I sensed the original convo I had for them had no point. I try to make sure every conversation has a point to it, even if it's simply to develop the character or then I'd start to meander and yeah.
Plus–and you can tell me if I'm wrong—it didn't feel like Seven much. IDK! That's there for your reading pleasure! (I had to cut out a few parts because I was rereading and realized they were too good to leave as a deleted scene so hehe)
And then there's the Victoria POV of their secret meeting (5k words). I'm excited for Victoria's development and that meeting was just the start so :)