So I Wanna Talk About FFXIV 1st Draft (mostly audio), looking for feedback

so yeah first time I'm doing this style of preview. was pretty hesitant cause I worry about spoiling the entire video, but hey if people didn't want it spoiled they could just not watch right?

purpose of this preview is to get feedback primarily, what parts you think may be unnecessary, what parts could use more elaboration, what parts take too long and can be trimmed up a bit, or anything else you may have in mind that can improve the video and it's goals.