Sorry for the delay, here are your translations for several of the Wyransith conversations in Night II. I will be doing the following structure for all of our weekly posts going forward. I'll include word order notes on a few of the longer ones, in part to check my own work and as a mini refresher. I will also mark some of the new words with a (✰) to draw your attention to them if you are the note-taking type.
Structure
Wyransith
Literal translation
English syntax translation
Translations
"Eri ywen tharran, na'Valdricht." (Serax)
"I her want, na'Valdricht." (subject-I, object-her, verb-want)
"I want her, na'Valdricht." (subject-I, verb-want, object-her)
Thy gythys*, Merja?" (Valdricht)
"You hunger, Merja?"
"Are you hungry, Merja?"
*appeared as gythyn in the narrative; typo
Ywen velushka nei sairith. Zhev thy ywen tharrys?" (Valdricht)
"She pet not is. Why you her want?"
"She is not a pet. Why do you want her?"
"Eri'na krelven cyneth." (Serax)
"My cock warm."
"To warm my cock."
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"Ywen zhevrin mathyr'sal merith nei sairith, na Merja?" (Valdricht)
"She that kind-of female not is, na Merja?"
"She is not that kind of female, is she Merja?"
"Veth eri'th thy val kalar'vek?" (Valdricht)
"What we you with will-do?" (interrogative, subject, object, future tense verb)
"What are we going to do with you?"
"Ywen eri'th val kethes geleth. Eri'thal thysselach cyneth." (Serax)
"She us with stays can. Our bed-furs warm."
"She can stay with us. Warm our bed furs."
✰ eri'thal = our
✰ kethir = to stay
"Thy ywen'sal salsyris zairys. Eri yn lumen." (Serax)
"You her-for lust sing. I it see."
"You [sing/feel] lust for her. I can see it."
➼ In Wyransith to sing means to express an emotion or emotion state. In English, we tend to embody our emotions. We are happy. The kids are frustrated. They will be angry.
Conversely, in Spanish we sometimes embody emotions. Ellas estan emocionadas, they are excited. Sometimes we have them. Tengo miedo, I have scared. It's a bit more complex than that, but for the purpose of learning Wyransith, just keep in mind that if you see the verb "zairyn" (to sing) + an emotion, you can interpret it as "to feel."
You might also notice that the verb "to speak" is zair, which shares various verb forms with zairyn. You'll have to rely on context to understand which is being expressed.
"Thy veskara eri thy'sal leyfryn ywen kreleth kavethes?" (Valdricht)
"You believe I your permission her to-fuck need?"
"Do you think I need your permission to fuck her?"
Yikes. I mean, remember the unique word order for judgments. [Judgment] + [What is judged/believed]
"Talven eri ywen tharran, eri ywen ceysar'vek." (Valdricht)
"If I her want, I her will-have."
"If I want her, I will have her."
Okay, big guy.
"Ywen thy'sal mathyr sairith, nei? Lynek. Tairel. Ywen ceysar'vir." (Serax)
"She your type is, no? Small. Delicate. Her have!"
"She is your type, no? Small. Delicate. Have her."
✰ Lynek = small
I left small even in the plus size version because the MC is still small compared to them, but if you think I should change it to something else like "soft" let me know!
"Eri thyra thy ywen drosketh seyrvir'vek." (Serax)
"I until you her break will-wait."
"I will wait until you break her."
✰ thyra = until
"Thy veskara eri ywen drosketh'vek?" (Valdricht)
"You think I her will-break?"
"You think I will break her?"
"Aen venirith thy'sal lumyeth sairith?" (Valdricht)
"Or that your hope is?"
"Or is that what you hope?"
✰ lumyeth = hope
"Veth talven eri ywen tharvelen?" (Valdricht)
"What if I her prefer?"
"What if I prefer her?"
"Veth talven sel ywen'sal kyrven eri koryn kalarel?" (Valdricht)
"What if just her-of scent me hard makes?"
"What if just the scent of her makes me hard?"
✰ kyrven = scent
"Luen varith wyran eri ywen val cywiraeth gelethes thyra thy seyrvires thysir?" (Valdricht)
"How many nights I her with make-love can until you wait stop?"
"How many nights can I make love to her until you stop waiting?"
✰ luen = how
✰ many = varith
✰ wyran = nights
✰ cywiraeth = to make love
"Thy eri'th val kethir tharrys? Na, Merja?" (Valdricht)
"You us with stay want? Na, Merja?"
"Do you want to stay with us? Merja?"
✰ na = hm (multipurpose word dependent on context) (interjection/discourse particle such as "hm?" "eh?" "right?")
"Eri'na kogryth prysir'vir, Merja." (Valdricht)
"My claws mind, Merja."
"Mind my claws, Merja."
"Eri a vira'vir, na'lynira. Eri llavesh sairyn." (Valdricht)
"I to come, na'lynira. I here am."
"I'm coming, na'lynira. I am here."
✰ na'lynira = my tender/soft one (term of endearment)
"Thy ywen kereveth'vek?" (Serax)
"You her to take-future?"
"Are you going to take her?"
✰ kereveth = to take (sexually)
Kereveth is a verb used almost exclusively in a sexual context, it is a gentler form of kreleth (to fuck) but cruder and more impersonal than cywiraeth (to make love).
"Nei. Ywen serynael sairith." (Valdricht)
"No. She virgin is."
"No. She is a virgin."
"Daenyr? Thy veskara?" (Serax)
"True? You believe?"
"Truly? You're certain?" (idiomatic)
"Ywen eri'na sairith naischa. Dralen eri ywen kereveth'vek." (Valdricht)
"She my is now. Soon I her take-will."
"She is mine now. Soon I will take her."
"Drei duv thy vyn llywen eri'na rhasir'dra? (Valdricht, Fated Mates)
"Which god you into path my cast?"
"Which god cast you into my path?"
✰ llywen = path
✰ rhasir = to cast
Conclusion
Okay, that was the majority of the Wyransith from last week's updates! Poor MC has no idea what she's gotten herself into with these two. Their dynamic with the MC in Dark Maiden is particularly fun to write because they're basically treating her like an object. Something to quarrel with, something to use, something to possess, but don't really acknowledge her dignity. Even in delaying sex with her, there's the sense that Valdricht is just saving a nice snack for later. He just came not too long before toying with her and intends to take her in the evening once he can thoroughly enjoy her. While the setup for Dark Maiden is quite toxic, it'll make the storyline all the better when the MC either learns to bite back or to use their own tactics against them.
-Mortish