Hey guys, I've linked the first draft of the script below. I left it cut off in the middle of the first sex scene because I need feedback first before continuing. I got the feedback on the last post and I'm making changes to make sure the comic this time doesn't feel as rushed as the last few comics. I've also made a new channel on discord with the pdf linked too, if you'd prefer to discuss it there.
All the character names are temporary (I used a generator found online), so if you have a suggestion for those let me know.
If any of the pacing or dialog feels off please let me know too.
Since this piece is going to be quite long, I'm also going to be using 3D to help out like in this, this, and this piece (Just wanted to reassure you guys that it won't look incredibly stiff or anything like that for the final!).
I'm also unsure of the way I'm going to be charging Petreon for this comic too, so if any of you have experience with other artists and how they do things with comic works I'd love to hear it.