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Alright,
First off, I just want to thank everyone for being patient with me while I slowly get the Thousand Sons Piece together.
This is the latest outline of most of the panels and pages and some character explorations (The sex scene is abruptly ended on page 19 because I'm still working on this and will probably add 5 more pages in the end). However, I'm uploading this now because I'd like to hear some feedback before I continue on with the sketch for the last few pages and then starting on color.
Hopefully the story is clear to follow along even without text.
I've also made changes to the script and it's attached below.