Page 23-25 Roughs
Three pages roughed out!
The first three images are NO TEXT; the next three are WITH TEXT. So you all have the option to decide if you want textual spoilers or not.
These gave me a bit of trouble, and looking at it now, it might be that I was trying to push the roughs into a higher fidelity of detail than usual. Like, some of the expressions are getting close to looking like pencils!
I struggled a bunch with the first page; originally, I wanted to get the ball-sniff/hand-lick AND push-onto-couch all in one page. I even got the roughs ball-pointed out on paper, BUT, when I started to get reference material for my poses/faces/ectra, I quickly realized the page was trying to do too much.
What I opted for was to split it into two. Give the hand-cleaning a moment longer. Push the homo-erotic shock/awe that Nick feels at watching Owen lick up a bunch of his own pre-cum. And THEN do the push-to-couch on the next page.
I don't know if it's perfect - I don't know if Nick's expressions are right - I mean, he's eaten Owen's ass in the past. Why would this make him all wobbly? But IDK - I want Nick to really look a bit weak in the knees for a flash?! And this seems like a prime opportunity; hell, is it a crime that I just want to draw Owen licking up cum, is that so wrong?! ;D
The end of the three pages gets me into a part fo the script that was going to be Owen's final little monologue with/at Judy, but I've since rethought that a bit. I might trim the text a bunch and instead inject it alongside of some of the sex. There's a fun storytelling visual I've been cooking on, and I'm really excited to give that a stronger focus before we hit the final beats of this chapter.
Hope you guys like this! I was really blown away by the response to the swallow-stuff last week. Has made me really excited to draw more of it. A few of you have asked for MORE information on Paw & Maw, so if I get a chance this weekend, I might type out a design document for it, so you guys can make use of it for your own things.
Have a great weekend, friends!
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