It's time for chapter four of our Los Angeles Good Intentions spinoff saga!
This one comes with a significant revision/ret-con. Like I said at the start, this is a work in progress, so some things are subject to change. In doing a revision pass, I made some changes in chapter two (Celestial Navigation), specifically to Evan's encounter with Sunday. Mostly it's physical/identity description and some dialogue, while the scene itself plays out basically the same. If you see the difference as it comes up in this new chapter, you aren't imagining things. I did indeed make changes. Posting stuff as Work-In-Progress is new for me, please forgive the bumps. :)
Given that, I'm attaching the revised chapter two (Celestial) in case anyone wants to see the specifics; if so, you can skip to the scene at Evan's apartment, 'cause the rest is essentially the same.
DEAD RECKONING is a fully new chapter, picking up where we left off from chapter three.
Hope you like it!