Hi all,
After a comment or two and some staring at my previous post, I've decided to re-do this with all the chapters linked and posted. (I thought about binding them all together, but most folks won't need more than a short glance at chapter two.) If you've already read this month's story, you're not missing anything. If you haven't started yet, hopefully this will make things more orderly!
(Ahem):
It's time for chapter four of our Los Angeles Good Intentions spinoff saga!
This one comes with a significant revision/ret-con. Like I said at the start, this is a work in progress, so some things are subject to change. In doing a revision pass, I made some changes in chapter two (Celestial Navigation), specifically to Evan's encounter with Sunday. Mostly it's physical/identity description and some dialogue, while the scene itself plays out basically the same. If you see the difference as it comes up in this new chapter, you aren't imagining things. I did indeed make changes. Posting stuff as Work-In-Progress is new for me, please forgive the bumps. :)
Chapters go:
1. God On the Run
2. Celestial Navigation (revise)
3. Constellations
4. Dead Reckoning
DEAD RECKONING is a fully new chapter, picking up where we left off from chapter three.